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Chapter 1 of "The Comeback King" begins with intriguing events: PROLOGUEHunterEveryone at practiceseems to know each otherāor at least know someone elseāexcept me. I feel... Donāt miss it!
PROLOGUE
Hunter
Everyone at practiceseems to know each otherāor at least know someone elseāexcept me. I feel them watching me, feel them wondering about the new kid who transferred freshman year to a private school he couldnāt afford without a scholarship, not on this side of town. None of them have said shit to me yet, probably because they know I donāt belong here, other than on the football field. Iām really good at football.
āHeyā¦youāre Hunter King, right?ā A guy steps up beside me. Heās got a golden tan, light brown hair, and brown eyes. He smiles at me the way you do with a friend. A real smile. The guy feels like heās bursting with sunshine, which is weirdālike that boy-next-door shit, the perfect kid with straight Aās, tons of friends, and everything a person can dream of, but also like he doesnāt let it go to his head.
āYep.ā I cross my arms, watching the guys run drills. Weāre practicing in shifts for nowāitās the first day of tryouts and the coaches need to see what weāre made of.
āI saw you earlier. Youāre even faster than they said, but like, have good brute strength too. The all-around running back who can do anything.ā
I chuckle, surprised that I do. Itās not the first time Iāve heard something like that, and itās true, but often it annoysme. Usually, it feels like someone is saying it because they want something from me, because they donāt expect me to be as good as I am, or because theyāre jealous. I donāt know this guy, but he doesnāt seem the type. Thereās something genuine about him.
āThanks. What position do you play?ā
āThe bench.ā He laughs in a way I could never do if Iād said the same thing. āMy dad wants me to be quarterback, but Iām not good enough to actually play.ā
āI can practice with you sometime,ā I find myself offering. I turn around and look behind me like I expect a second Hunter King to be standing there because those words sure as shit didnāt come out of my mouth. Only thereās no other Hunter there, and I did in fact say them.
āReally? Thatād be cool. Thanks,ā he says, just as heās called out to the field. He jogs away, and I realize I didnāt even ask him his name.
Heās right, though. Heās not very good. He doesnāt have the athleticism of most of the guys out here, but itās clear how much he wants it, how hard he tries.
I like him. Heās real in a world where most people arenāt. I want to help him get better. For some reason, I want this guy on the team with me. I want to be his friend. Itās weird as shit because I donāt typically think that way, donāt decide I want to be friends with someone, but I want it with him. Feels right.
When Coach calls me onto the field, I jog out, heart racing, excitement ready to explode out of me. This is what Iāve always wanted. Playing on such a good high school team, then going to college, before Iām drafted. Nothing will stop me from making my dreams come true.
And just like I wanted, I kill it in practice, showing them everything I can do.
āHey,ā I say to the kid whoās like sunshine in a bottle, once weāre in the locker room. āWanna stay late and practice? I just have to get to the city bus by eight to get home on time.ā Since I donāt live close, my mom and I are responsible for my transportation. Mom brings me to school in the morning, but sheās on evening shifts now, so I have to take the bus, then walk home, which she hates. It makes her feel guilty, when she has no reason to be. She works her ass off to make ends meet, but itās hard to do alone. When my dad died, that changed everything for us, and sheās been playing catch-up ever since.
āReally?ā he asks.
āYou donāt have to, but if you want, Iām down.ā All I ever want is to play football.
āYeah. Thatād be cool. My mom is already here to pick me up, though. Do you want to come to my house instead?ā
Thereās no doubt in my mind this kid has money, that we live in totally different worlds. I should tell him no, that I have to go homeāalso because my mama willnotbe happy with me going to some random personās house. But I want to play football, so I shrug and say, āSure, but as I said, I have to be at the bus station by eight.ā
āYou ride the bus home?ā Thereās no mocking in his tone, simply curiosity, but my back stiffens.
āNot all of us live like you.ā
āNo, I didnāt mean⦠Shit. Iām sorry. I sound like a douchebag.ā
I chuckle.
āCome on, letās go,ā he says.
I grab my stuff and walk with him out to the lot, where he points to a black Escalade. A blonde woman is in the driverās seat, and her gaze lingers on me for a second before she smiles.
āIām AbbieāEllisās mom.ā
Ellis, so thatās his name. Iām glad she said it before I looked like an idiot not knowing it. āHunter King, maāam.ā
I could be wrong, but thereās a spark of recognition in her gaze, whichā¦doesnāt make sense. Thereās definitely a lot of talk about me going to school here and being one of the most watched high school football players in the state, but I doubt some random mom would know anything about me.
āCan Hunter come over?ā Ellis asks. āWeāre gonna play football for a bit. Then I was thinking he could have dinner with us, and maybe you could drive him home after?ā