The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building] - Chapter 24 – Something On The Range

Chapter 24 – Something On The Range

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Chapter 25 of "The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building]" kicks off with thrilling moments: Maisara stared Fortia down. Begging, shouting and tears had just filled the room. “Fine.” Maisara... Read more!

Maisara stared Fortia down. Begging, shouting and tears had just filled the room. “Fine.” Maisara finally agreed. “I will do it, but you owe me for this.”

The tundra of eastern Karaina was sparsely populated, covered in age-old pine trees and never inspected. Who wanted to here? Certainly not any governmental officials. Thus, a location had been chosen, a half hour’s drive from the nearby town. The trees were felled in a block, targets were put up and a small shooting range was erected. Men trained on it, and an elf oversaw the whole process. Tall, in leather boots and a long fur-coat, he strode to try and defeat the utter boredom.

Iliyal paused his stroll around the shooting range with his A1, a wonderful weapon. He had been put in charge of Kira Car Factory and Aklasia manufacturing plant. The Tarin deal was being delayed by the other side. That luckily was for Narma to sort out, not him. Iliyal aimed, loaded a shot, pulled the trigger and fired.

An explosion rang out and he squinted to check. Another bullseye. He chuckled to himself and slung the rifle back over his shoulder. He had used muskets in the Great War before and the whole thing was like riding a horse: once you worked it out, you never lost it. He picked up the brass casing, juggled it in one hand to cool it off and pocketed it. The humans sometimes buried them, but he had fought against Leona, paranoia of her luck was much like riding a horse: Once you got it, you never lost it.

A cool breeze came across and a snowflake landed on Iliyal’s nose. Karaina was a country split into two by the Laika mountain range. The west was Karaina A, the east was Karaina B. A was a modern country, B was a land tamed only in name. A piece of geography only claimed by Karaina for formality. In Karaina A, autumn was in full stride, here, winter only gave an inch for two months.

Iliyal passed a squad of men training to shoot. They weren’t excellent shots, but they hit more often than not. Guns weren’t hard to use and Arascus was correct: a day of this was worth a year training with the blade. Their forms were good, they simply needed to practice more. One of them saluted to him and he saluted back. “How’s the training going?” Iliyal asked.

“Very good Sir! Today I hit two bullseyes.”

“Good job private.” Iliyal gave the man a pat on his shoulder and walked off. It was a lie to say he did not care about these people, but he made it a case not to associate too much with humans: their lifespans would eventually catch up with them whereas his did not. All elves made this mistake when they were young. Iliyal turned to the range and saw someone hit the target five times in a row. Good. He wanted that from all of them.

He glanced at the humans, they were using binoculars to check their hits. Before Iliyal arrived, they were checking by walking up to the target. Binoculars saved time and saved time meant more training. He pulled the coat tighter around himself as the snow start to fall. Another hour of this before conditions would make them unable to shoot. Iliyal would push them as far as they could go.

More shots, more targets hit. Good. Getting better. One of the humans shouted. “Animal on the ea-“

“HOLD FIRE!” Iliyal’s voice drowned him out. That wasn’t an animal. “STOP SHOOTING! HOLD FIRE! ALL OF YOU!” That was impossible! Here?! “STAND UP! IN RANKS!” The men moved immediately. No one said anything, they merely looked curiously at him. “DO NOT SHOOT! I REPEAT DO NOT SHOOT! NO MATTER WHAT YOU SEE!”

He chuckled to himself. If there ever was a test of bravery, this was about to be it. Iliyal strolled onto the range at a brisk pace. Rifle shouldered, one arm resting on the sword on his hip. “WHO ARE YOU!” He heard the soldiers start to whisper among themselves.

“What’s happening?” “I don’t know.” “Part of his exam?” “It’s cold, this is better than the ground.” Humans would be far out of earshot, but he wasn’t a human. He ignored their whispers, humans always talked to each other; it was one thing to instil discipline, it was another to try and wage a futile campaign against their nature. “Is that an animal?” “It was furry.” “A badger?” “You ever talk to a badger?” “A talking badger then?”

“I’M NOT GOING TO HURT YOU!” Iliyal shouted again and the figure reappeared from behind the tree. A girl, a tattered coat over her small frame, obviously hungry. Her hair was too long, too shaggy and thick. Her hands were covered in the same fur. Two small ears peaked out from the top of her head, sharp and pointed, like a hunting dog’s.

“I’m… hungry…” She said it loud enough for him to hear even if he was a human. She took two steps into the open and then collapsed. Iliyal stood there, a smile growing on his face. Maybe it would have worked on someone else, but he wasn’t born yesterday. His eyes scanned the treeline and he saw them.

Behind the thick pine trees, creeping under bushes, some in the trees themselves. Armed with spear and axe and hammer and club, all covered in fur. All with blood-red eyes. He ignored the smaller specimens when a javelin suddenly burst from the woods. Straight at him.

Iliyal sidestepped long before the shot hit him. He took a breath and spoke. There was no need to shout, they had better hearing than him.

“Children of Fer, I am not your enemy.”

📖 Contents

1 Chapter 1: Prologue – A Century of War 2 Chapter 1 – A Millennia of Peace 3 Chapter 2 – A God Unearthed 4 Chapter 3 – Lady Luck 5 Chapter 4 – Unimpressive Welcome 6 Chapter 5 – Panic In The Pantheon 7 Chapter 6 – Divinity Watch 8 Chapter 7 – Hunger Unending 9 Chapter 8 – Shot In The Dark 10 Chapter 9 – Light, Order & Peace 11 Chapter 10 – The Gates 12 Chapter 11 – False Alarm 13 Chapter 12 – Within The Divine Library 14 Chapter 13 – A Pantheon Cracking 15 Chapter 14 – The Librarian 16 Chapter 15 – Fading Light Contingency 17 Chapter 16 – Under Budget, Ahead of Schedule 18 Chapter 17 – Deeper 19 Chapter 18 – Hunting Queen-Beast 20 Chapter 19 – And In We Go 21 Chapter 20 – Fading Light, Fading Luck 22 Chapter 21 – Peace Unto War, War Unto Peace. 23 Chapter 22 – The Pack Stands 24 Chapter 23 – Librarian No More 25 Chapter 24 – Something On The Range 26 Chapter 25 – The Pack Fights 27 Chapter 26 – Within the Fortress Walls, The Huntsmaster Prowls 28 Chapter 27 – The Greatest Hunt Ends at Last 29 Chapter 28 – Order & War 30 Chapter 29 – Godbiter 31 Chapter 30 – Missing in Action 32 Chapter 31 – A Return To Arascus 33 Chapter 32 – A Sword for the Humanitarians 34 Chapter 33 – Return To Normalcy 35 Chapter 34 – Order Prepares For War 36 Chapter 35 – Negotiating with a Hammer 37 Chapter 36 – To Steal The Sky 38 Chapter 37 – Seductive, Magnanimous, Vigorous War 39 Chapter 38 – Operation SkyStealer 40 Chapter 39 – Accelerate 41 Chapter 40 – Out of the Frying Pan 42 Chapter 41 – Into the Fire 43 Chapter 42 – A Lack of Finesse 44 Chapter 43 – All is Fair with Love and War 45 Chapter 44 – Human Artillery 46 Chapter 45 – Relics of the Past 47 Chapter 46 – Within the Fortress Walls, The Spectre Prowls 48 Chapter 47 – The First Line of Defence 49 Chapter 48 – Of Death 50 Chapter 49 – An Unexpected Guest 51 Chapter 50 – One Last Try 52 Chapter 51 – Stupidity At Its Finest 53 Chapter 52 – The World’s Greatest Strategist 54 Chapter 53 – War Eternal 55 Chapter 54 – Purest of Nobles 56 Chapter 55 – The Last Time We Meet 57 Chapter 56 – The Pack Will March 58 Chapter 57 – End Education, Begin Annihilation 59 Chapter 58 – Mikhail Alash, Bringer of Jobs, Restorer of Cities, Saviour of Children. 60 Chapter 59 – Sorcerers of the Future 61 Chapter 60 – Ready to Report: Operation SkyStealer 62 Chapter 61 – The Ground Team 63 Chapter 62 – The Reunion of a Millennium 64 Chapter 63 – The Game is Set 65 Chapter 64 – A Pantheon Sick 66 Chapter 65 – The Gates of Olympiada 67 Chapter 66 – Mother Nature, Capricious & Cruel 68 Chapter 67 – Cry Havoc And Let Slip The Dog Of War 69 Chapter 68 – A Pantheon Shattered 70 Chapter 69 – Operation Misfortune 71 Chapter 70 – The Dead Legion 72 Chapter 71 – A Vow For War 73 Chapter 72 – An Arikan Sunset 74 Chapter 73 – Sunset Contingency 75 Chapter 74 – The Dreaded Delusions of Humanity 76 Chapter 75 – First Leona, Now The World! 77 Chapter 76 – The Chaos Crisis 78 Chapter 77 – Next Daughter: Anassa! 79 Chapter 78 – The Calling Jungle 80 Chapter 79 – The Jungle Takes 81 Chapter 80 – The Aldanstein Meeting 82 Chapter 81 – War’s Reinforcements 83 Chapter 82 – As It Was Back Then 84 Chapter 83 – Into The Jungle 85 Chapter 84 – The Jungle’s Skin 86 Chapter 85 – Tiny Little Wolves 87 Chapter 86 – Some Things Never Change 88 Chapter 87 – The Jungle’s Stomach 89 Chapter 88 – To Plan For The Unplannable 90 Chapter 89 – Dinner is Served 91 Chapter 90 – A Concoction of Divine Blood 92 Chapter 91 – Breakout 93 Chapter 92 – The Igos Crisis 94 Chapter 93 – Gratitude Divines Cannot Do 95 Chapter 94 – The Gratitude of Mortals 96 Chapter 95 – Bloodied, but Unbeaten 97 Chapter 96 – Straight Back To Work 98 Chapter 97 – The Kirinyaan Internal Affairs Bureau 99 Chapter 98 – Shoulders To Carry A Campaign 100 Chapter 99 – Jungle Stalkers! 101 Chapter 100 – To Sell A Binturong 102 Chapter 101 – Two months in Nanbasa 103 Chapter 102 – The Reclamation War 104 Chapter 103 – Lioness, Queen of the Animal Kingdom 105 Chapter 104 – An Arika of Ash 106 Chapter 105 – The Caretaker Arrives 107 Chapter 106 – Napalm Baby! 108 Chapter 107 – A Continental Divine 109 Chapter 108 – The O-Bomb 110 Chapter 109 – Ex-White Pantheon, Meet Arascus. 111 Chapter 110 – To Claim A Continent 112 Chapter 111 – The Worst Thing I’ve Ever Seen 113 Chapter 112 – Beasthood’s Wordgames 114 Chapter 113 – To Steal A Country 115 Chapter 114 – A Return To The Land of Magic 116 Chapter 115 – Thunderstorms and Lightning Clouds 117 Chapter 116 – The Rage of Beast and Man 118 Chapter 117 – My Credentials? I am Me! 119 Chapter 118 – Twenty Vials Of Blood

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