The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building] - Chapter 42 – A Lack of Finesse

Chapter 42 – A Lack of Finesse

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Opening Chapter 43 of "The Greatest Sin [Progression Fantasy][Kingdom Building]": Mikhail’s engineers sweated as they started to cut into the stolen planes.Mounting guns on a... Read on for more!

Mikhail’s engineers sweated as they started to cut into the stolen planes.

Mounting guns on a plane. How hard could it be?

Interrogations where never fun. Maisara did not know what the others found enjoyable about them. Maybe she could see the humour of it if she were a fellow mortal, using word games to assemble chains that bind harder than steel, but she had to face the reality of it: She was a Divine. When humans saw her, they either broke immediately or they took their knowledge to the grave. Elves where even worse, an elf had some sort of vain pride in his lifespan that made him think he had a higher patience than she did.

One glance at this elf before Maisara made confirmed all her suspicions that this would be a waste of time. He was meditating on the bed in an obnoxious fashion when she came in as if the reality of being locked in the Lower Prison of Olympiada did not concern in the least. Ilwin Tremali.

She had fought against a Tremali once. An Iliyal Tremali, that fellow had served as one of Arascus’ titanic generals in the war. It would not surprise Maisara to find out Iliyal had Divine blood within him, the man was simply something else. She had killed two Tremalis too, after the Great War, in a vain attempt to lure Iliyal out of his hiding.

“Are you not worried?” Maisara said as she sat down. There was something belittling about dressing up for a mortal. Why should he deserve to see her silver armour? Should he be allowed to talk to her? Why did he even gaze at her?

“Not in the least.” Ilwin replied.

“I can see that.” Maisara said. “Who else has interrogated you?”

“Only Allasaria.” Ilwin replied and stared at her. Maisara clicked her tongue and ended this charade of him staring at her from the bed.

“Sit here.” She indicated to the chair on the other side of the table. The elf moved, slow and uncaring as if he did not care what other plans and plots she had running. “What did Allasaria tell you?” Ilwin was no Iliyal, and Maisara knew she had made a mistake the moment she saw his eyebrows raise in surprise.

“What did Allasaria tell me Goddess?” Did he just coo at her? Who did he think he was! “She said she was only interested because Leona took interest in me, and then that I have a meeting with you, someone else, and then I would be executed if all of you took no interest in me.” He shrugged. “I’m not an interesting person, so save yourself the hassle and just skip to the execution.”

And with Maisara’s mistake, came Ilwin’s mistake.

Leona? Leona? Fucking Leona? Of course! Why else would a mortal be locked in a place reserved for Divines? The clockworks in Maisara’s head began to turn as reasoned her way into why exactly would Leona herself would consider just a man like this to be of importance.

All roads lead to Arascus.

And it lined up too well with Kassandora’s revelations.

Maisara, trapped in the curse of that terrible promise she had made to the Goddess of War, finally saw a sliver of light make its way into the chains binding her. “Leona took interest in you?” Maisara asked. The elf shrugged.

“I do not know why.” Now that she knew, the elf’s relaxed movements had a reason. He wasn’t mad in the slightest, he was exactly like his grandfather: Cold, stubborn and utterly unyielding. Those eyes of his practically laughed with mockery as he stared at her.

“Is Iliyal Tremali still alive?” Maisara asked. That was a good route, if she could confirm that then-

“I have never heard of that name.” The elf replied, bored and despondent.

“Your name is Tremali too.” Maisara would not let him off that easily.

“I don’t keep contact with family.” And that faint glimmer of light shattered as if Allasaria had come to put it out.

“I don’t believe you.” Maisara said after a moment’s pause. The elf looked at her as if she was a little girl.

“I can’t help with that.” To think he would have cheek with her! Who did he think he was?

“Like I said, I don’t believe you. Elves live a long time.”

“I’ve never heard of an elf to live past a thousand.” Ilwin replied. “So is there anything else you wish to know?”

“I know that…” Maisara’s voice cut off. She stammered as the steel chains of promise tightened around her throat. The elf raised an eyebrow, it was beyond obvious he had seen her moment of weakness, how could he not? Even a baby would have been able to see the fresh paint of disconcert slathered over Maisara. “I can give you something.”

“What can you give me?” The elf finally dropped his ridiculous tone. He leaned forwards, his voice became sharp and sly, each syllable stressed. Classical elven intonation.

“A way out.” Maisara said with a heavy heart. And here was another deal she would have to stick to. “You tell me everything you know, and I will personally take you where you want to go, I will leave you there and not return to that location for a week. That should be enough time for you to disappear.” Ilwin laughed. The elf actually laughed! He laughed at her!

“It’s not that I don’t believe you, Goddess of Order.” He began. “But my life is not that important compared to the men I fight alongside.”

“Your men can go with you too.”

“I wasn’t talking about the ones you’ve captured.” Maisara blinked. This was it? This was everything? She wanted to scream. To behead the man this instant.

But then, if he told everyone Arascus was around, then the promise would be kept. She thought of one desperate final assault.

“The next fool who has taken interest in you is Helenna, Goddess of Love. She will break you.” Maisara said. If reasoning had to be used, then reasoning was to be used. Order was composed of rules, and those rules had to be followed. All men desired Order, nothing thrived in Chaos. “She will whisper sweet nothings into your ear until you every single skeleton you have locked away is brought into the open. And then you will become her dog.”

“I’ll take the risk.”

“A great many men have attempted to tame Helenna before, they were better men than you.”

“So?” Ilwin asked. So? So? FUCKING SO? How could he not see reason when reason was sprawled naked before him!

“So if you allow me to vouch for you, you at least have something to gain.” Maisara said. “I’m not a monster and I cannot lie. If I say I’ll deal with you, then I will.” Ilwin merely shook his head, smiling like a fool who was just made king of the world.

“Proud Goddess, you are a rather poor salesman.”

“SALESMAN? I’M NOT SELLING ANYTHING HERE!” Maisara barked.

“There’s obviously things you know. Iliyal Tremali for one, Allasaria nor Leona asked about him.” Ilwin said. “Now I can believe you have merely failed to capture my grandfather for a thousand years, but I will confirm this for you, he is still out there, and he’s still causing a headache for you.” Maisara’s heart dropped.

“And is…” Her throat tightened again. She would not mention Arascus, she could not break the promise.

“So I have nothing to say. I am no fool. If Goddess Helenna wishes to parley with me before my execution, she is the Goddess of Love and my sins are not great enough to delude me into thinking I can outwit her, but at least my eyes will have a pleasant final feast.”

“You are very much like your grandfather.” Ilwin smiled honestly at that. It was a beaming smile of pride, like a child who had been just ‘good job’ by their father.

“I try to be.” Maisara tried to stammer another word out, and then she held her breath. This was simply a brutal defeat for her. She stood up and just about stopped herself from slamming her hands on the table.

“I…” Ilwin raised an eyebrow and motioned for her to continue. “I will return.”

📖 Contents

1 Chapter 1: Prologue – A Century of War 2 Chapter 1 – A Millennia of Peace 3 Chapter 2 – A God Unearthed 4 Chapter 3 – Lady Luck 5 Chapter 4 – Unimpressive Welcome 6 Chapter 5 – Panic In The Pantheon 7 Chapter 6 – Divinity Watch 8 Chapter 7 – Hunger Unending 9 Chapter 8 – Shot In The Dark 10 Chapter 9 – Light, Order & Peace 11 Chapter 10 – The Gates 12 Chapter 11 – False Alarm 13 Chapter 12 – Within The Divine Library 14 Chapter 13 – A Pantheon Cracking 15 Chapter 14 – The Librarian 16 Chapter 15 – Fading Light Contingency 17 Chapter 16 – Under Budget, Ahead of Schedule 18 Chapter 17 – Deeper 19 Chapter 18 – Hunting Queen-Beast 20 Chapter 19 – And In We Go 21 Chapter 20 – Fading Light, Fading Luck 22 Chapter 21 – Peace Unto War, War Unto Peace. 23 Chapter 22 – The Pack Stands 24 Chapter 23 – Librarian No More 25 Chapter 24 – Something On The Range 26 Chapter 25 – The Pack Fights 27 Chapter 26 – Within the Fortress Walls, The Huntsmaster Prowls 28 Chapter 27 – The Greatest Hunt Ends at Last 29 Chapter 28 – Order & War 30 Chapter 29 – Godbiter 31 Chapter 30 – Missing in Action 32 Chapter 31 – A Return To Arascus 33 Chapter 32 – A Sword for the Humanitarians 34 Chapter 33 – Return To Normalcy 35 Chapter 34 – Order Prepares For War 36 Chapter 35 – Negotiating with a Hammer 37 Chapter 36 – To Steal The Sky 38 Chapter 37 – Seductive, Magnanimous, Vigorous War 39 Chapter 38 – Operation SkyStealer 40 Chapter 39 – Accelerate 41 Chapter 40 – Out of the Frying Pan 42 Chapter 41 – Into the Fire 43 Chapter 42 – A Lack of Finesse 44 Chapter 43 – All is Fair with Love and War 45 Chapter 44 – Human Artillery 46 Chapter 45 – Relics of the Past 47 Chapter 46 – Within the Fortress Walls, The Spectre Prowls 48 Chapter 47 – The First Line of Defence 49 Chapter 48 – Of Death 50 Chapter 49 – An Unexpected Guest 51 Chapter 50 – One Last Try 52 Chapter 51 – Stupidity At Its Finest 53 Chapter 52 – The World’s Greatest Strategist 54 Chapter 53 – War Eternal 55 Chapter 54 – Purest of Nobles 56 Chapter 55 – The Last Time We Meet 57 Chapter 56 – The Pack Will March 58 Chapter 57 – End Education, Begin Annihilation 59 Chapter 58 – Mikhail Alash, Bringer of Jobs, Restorer of Cities, Saviour of Children. 60 Chapter 59 – Sorcerers of the Future 61 Chapter 60 – Ready to Report: Operation SkyStealer 62 Chapter 61 – The Ground Team 63 Chapter 62 – The Reunion of a Millennium 64 Chapter 63 – The Game is Set 65 Chapter 64 – A Pantheon Sick 66 Chapter 65 – The Gates of Olympiada 67 Chapter 66 – Mother Nature, Capricious & Cruel 68 Chapter 67 – Cry Havoc And Let Slip The Dog Of War 69 Chapter 68 – A Pantheon Shattered 70 Chapter 69 – Operation Misfortune 71 Chapter 70 – The Dead Legion 72 Chapter 71 – A Vow For War 73 Chapter 72 – An Arikan Sunset 74 Chapter 73 – Sunset Contingency 75 Chapter 74 – The Dreaded Delusions of Humanity 76 Chapter 75 – First Leona, Now The World! 77 Chapter 76 – The Chaos Crisis 78 Chapter 77 – Next Daughter: Anassa! 79 Chapter 78 – The Calling Jungle 80 Chapter 79 – The Jungle Takes 81 Chapter 80 – The Aldanstein Meeting 82 Chapter 81 – War’s Reinforcements 83 Chapter 82 – As It Was Back Then 84 Chapter 83 – Into The Jungle 85 Chapter 84 – The Jungle’s Skin 86 Chapter 85 – Tiny Little Wolves 87 Chapter 86 – Some Things Never Change 88 Chapter 87 – The Jungle’s Stomach 89 Chapter 88 – To Plan For The Unplannable 90 Chapter 89 – Dinner is Served 91 Chapter 90 – A Concoction of Divine Blood 92 Chapter 91 – Breakout 93 Chapter 92 – The Igos Crisis 94 Chapter 93 – Gratitude Divines Cannot Do 95 Chapter 94 – The Gratitude of Mortals 96 Chapter 95 – Bloodied, but Unbeaten 97 Chapter 96 – Straight Back To Work 98 Chapter 97 – The Kirinyaan Internal Affairs Bureau 99 Chapter 98 – Shoulders To Carry A Campaign 100 Chapter 99 – Jungle Stalkers! 101 Chapter 100 – To Sell A Binturong 102 Chapter 101 – Two months in Nanbasa 103 Chapter 102 – The Reclamation War 104 Chapter 103 – Lioness, Queen of the Animal Kingdom 105 Chapter 104 – An Arika of Ash 106 Chapter 105 – The Caretaker Arrives 107 Chapter 106 – Napalm Baby! 108 Chapter 107 – A Continental Divine 109 Chapter 108 – The O-Bomb 110 Chapter 109 – Ex-White Pantheon, Meet Arascus. 111 Chapter 110 – To Claim A Continent 112 Chapter 111 – The Worst Thing I’ve Ever Seen 113 Chapter 112 – Beasthood’s Wordgames 114 Chapter 113 – To Steal A Country 115 Chapter 114 – A Return To The Land of Magic 116 Chapter 115 – Thunderstorms and Lightning Clouds 117 Chapter 116 – The Rage of Beast and Man 118 Chapter 117 – My Credentials? I am Me! 119 Chapter 118 – Twenty Vials Of Blood

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