Vision Grid System: The Comeback Of Ryoma Takeda - Chapter 1: Dead Man’s Ticket

Chapter 1: Dead Man’s Ticket

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If anyone asked Ryoma what kind of power he wanted most, he would say the Sharingan. Not the fancy bleeding-eye, space-warping kind. Just the two tomoes are enough. Enough to copy a boxer’s jab, dodge a sucker punch, or set a perfect counter. With that alone, he could dominate any boxing match.

Even Trafalgar Law’s devil fruit power would do. Room, slice space, and then casually moonwalk into a bank vault. Commit the greatest heist in history without leaving a fingerprint. Get out rich.

He’s not asking for much, just a way out, one real edge. And the joke is, he actually has one, a unique ability.

It’s not from some weird looking fruit or a ninja bloodline. But it’s something that sparks in his brain after an accident, something wrong behind his eyes.

Now he notices everything, too much of everything. The staggered rhythm of a man’s breathing. A loose thread on someone’s sock across the train. Details no one’s supposed to notice. And details that bury themselves in his mind and refuse to leave.

But he gained it the same moment he lost the ability to properly use his left leg. It doesn’t help him fight, doesn’t help him live.

So now he’s here, ringside at a title match, front row, center seat. The ticket cost the last of his savings.

"What’s with that clumsy footwork?" Ryoma shouts, half whining. "How the hell did you get here with technique that ugly?"

He used to dream of being in there himself, fighting, owning a belt. But that was before a truck came out of nowhere on a rainy Tuesday and crushed his left leg, his future, his everything.

Now all he has is a sharp eye, and a crumpled betting ticket in his hand. He’s put everything on the challenger, every last yen.

Not because the odds are good. Because the champion’s defending his title for the seventh time tonight, undefeated, untouchable. Almost everyone in the arena is riding on him. So, if the challenger wins, Ryoma walks out of here the richest man in the block.

But if he loses... he isn’t planning to wake up the next morning.

Unfortunately, the challenger is getting torn apart. He’s been on the defensive since round one. There’s no spark in him, just stubbornness and a chin that hasn’t broken yet. He fights just like Ryoma lives: cornered, desperate, and barely hanging on.

"Come on!" Ryoma gestures in frustration, shifting his weight off his dead left leg. "Did you even train? Step it up next round!"

Then the bell rings. Round three begins, and the match surges forward. Ryoma isn’t watching like a fan. He’s analyzing, dissecting, betting on the only thing he has left: his sharp eyes.

And then, he sees it. There’s a tiny delay in the champion’s guard reset, a half-twist in his posture, and the way his upper body dips when backing out of close range.

Then the challenger lands a soft body shot, not much but just enough to make the champion wince.

Ryoma’s breath catches. He shoots to his feet, heart hammering.

"THE LEFT RIB! AIM AT THE LEFT RIB!"

The champion hears him, even glances at him. Suddenly, his rhythm falters, and his footwork slows. He grows cautious, too cautious.

"I knew it," Ryoma whispers, clutching his ticket. "HE MUST HAVE HURT HIS LEFT RIBS DURING TRAINING. AIM FOR IT!!!"

But the challenger doesn’t hear him. And the bell rings again, ending the third round.

The champion walks back to his corner. He is still in control, but the confidence has left him.

"What’s wrong?" his Second asks. "Why didn’t you end him there?"

But the champion doesn’t answer. His eyes stay locked on Ryoma.

"Who is that guy?"

No one answers, no one knows. Because Ryoma is just a nobody.

"Why you look so spooked?" his Second asks.

"I did injure my left ribs during the last spar."

"And you only tell me now? Is that serious?"

The Champion turns quiet. But his face is enough to tell everything.

The bell rings again. But Ryoma has already left his seat. The betting ticket is still clutched in his hand, only because of his anger.

And then...

WAAAA!!!

The crowd erupts.

Ryoma turns and there he sees the champion is on one knee, clutching his left ribs. The challenger has just grazed the same spot again.

But this time, the pain shows, and the Champion’s mask has completely gone. He gets up, but he’s not the same.

The challenger sees it now, he smells blood. Then he gambles everything, throwing himself at that one weakness, betting his life on the line.

And...

"ANOTHER DOWN!"

"That’s twice in a minute!"

"Can he stand? Can he continue?"

"Oh my god... The challenger pulls off the most tragic upset in championship history!"

The crowd freezes, stunned, completely silent.

And Ryoma? You might think he is the happiest man in the building. But the win tastes like nothing he expected.

As he pushes out through the arena doors, past stunned bettors and muttering security guards, the night air hits his lungs like ice.

He should be grinning, should be screaming. Instead, he just stands there on the steps, ticket in hand, the cold bleeding through his coat, and a voice echoing in his skull.

"You said you’d find something else. But all you found were excuses."

That hallway, and that look in her eyes. The way she stood by the door, one hand on her suitcase, the other fiddling with her phone.

"You’re not the man I fell in love with, Ryoma. You’ve changed!"

He’d begged her not to go. Just one more chance, he’d find something, anything. But she’d already left even before that night. Not physically, just... piece by piece.

"So you’re leaving me because I lost the fight?"

"No. I’m leaving because you stopped fighting."

He’d replayed that moment a thousand times. Wondering what would’ve changed if he’d said something different. If he hadn’t been broken. If he still had the gloves on.

But the past doesn’t forgive.

Ryoma grips the ticket until the paper creases and curls in his fist.

"This time, no one’s leaving me behind."

Later... at a bar near the Ryogoku Kokugikan arena, Ryoma is a god among mortals. He stands at the center of the bar, flushed with victory, bathed in neon and praise, surrounded by strangers calling him a genius.

"Drinks on me!" he shouts, holding the winning ticket high. "Drink like it’s the end of the world! I may not have the money, but look at this ticket."

Sake flows, and music booms. A waitress kisses him on the cheek. People lift him like he’s some kind of prophet.

He grins so hard it hurts. For once, he feels seen. For once, he wins. But the joy never stays, because it ends soon after the bar door creaks open.

Three men walk in, black suits, silent, and cold.

Ryoma turns, blinking. "You wanna have a drink too?"

Instead of an answer...

BANG, BANG!!!

Two bullets, punch through his gut.

People scream, chairs topple, and the hitmen simply walk out without a word.

Ryoma collapses to the floor, gasping. Blood spreads beneath him. The ticket is still clutched in his hand, red soaking through the paper.

His eyes remain open, still sharp, still seeing everything in great detail. But it doesn’t help him now.

📖 Contents

1 Chapter 1: Dead Man’s Ticket 2 Chapter 2: Prologue Rewritten 3 Chapter 3: Slipping Into the Zone 4 Chapter 4: The Silence Before the Count 5 Chapter 5: A Hug Ten Years Late 6 Chapter 6: Soba and A Seed of Doubt 7 Chapter 7: Before the Growth 8 Chapter 8: The Challenger’s Path 9 Chapter 9: The Weight of a Year 10 Chapter 1: Naivety At Its Finest 11 Chapter 1: The Rookie’s Snare 12 Chapter 1: When Pride Bleeds 13 Chapter 1: A Monster In the Making 14 Chapter 1: Take This Home 15 Chapter 1: The Road That Broke Him 16 Chapter 1: And the Slap That Miss 17 Chapter 1: Eyes On the Prize 18 Chapter 1: Verbal Knockdown 19 Chapter 1: When the Big Brother Calls 20 Chapter 2: The Weight of a Year 21 Chapter 2: Kirizume’s Little Audience 22 Chapter 2: The Weight of Reika’s Presence 23 Chapter 2: First Bell, First Blood 24 Chapter 2: No Headgear 25 Chapter 2: The Weight of A Body Blow 26 Chapter 2: Resolve 27 Chapter 2: The Last Exchange 28 Chapter 2: The Mark He Left 29 Chapter 2: The Bruising Truth 30 Chapter 3: Cross-counter From Three Different Angles 31 Chapter 3: An Invitation You Can’t Refuse 32 Chapter 3: The Stone Refuses to be Shaped 33 Chapter 3: How To Negotiate With Noodles 34 Chapter 3: Too Big For Small Stages 35 Chapter 3: The Three Wolves 36 Chapter 3: The Weight of A Promise 37 Chapter 3: Ronin in the Rain 38 Chapter 3: Flaws 39 Chapter 3: Rigged Path 40 Chapter 4: Shrinking the Ring 41 Chapter 4: Forged in Pressure 42 Chapter 4: A Man at Home, A Wolf in the Ring 43 Chapter 4: Silent Misery 44 Chapter 4: Sweat and Shiitake 45 Chapter 4: The Fox at the Scale 46 Chapter 4: The Breaking Point 47 Chapter 4: Rookies’ Stage 48 Chapter 4: Future Against Past 49 Chapter 4: Standing His Ground 50 Chapter 5: Catch Me If You Can 51 Chapter 5: The Trap Within Sight 52 Chapter 5: No Corner to Lean On 53 Chapter 5: The Third Round Gamble 54 Chapter 5: Just Me, and My Boxing 55 Chapter 5: Borrowed Time 56 Chapter 5: Trading Madness 57 Chapter 5: The Weight of A Fist 58 Chapter 5: Clash Outside the Ring 59 Chapter 5: An Offer That Remains 60 Chapter 6: The Craziest Idea 61 Chapter 6: Out of Sync 62 Chapter 6: The Gym That Draws Flies 63 Chapter 6: The Jab That Must Speak 64 Chapter 6: Nakahara’s Joy

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