Vision Grid System: The Comeback Of Ryoma Takeda - Chapter 4: The Silence Before the Count

Chapter 4: The Silence Before the Count

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In Chapter 4 of "Vision Grid System: The Comeback Of Ryoma Takeda": The crowd in the spectator stands begins to stir, voices rising with each swing Tōjō... Discover the next events!

The crowd in the spectator stands begins to stir, voices rising with each swing Tōjō throws. Then, like a wave breaking, the chant starts, scattered first, and then unified.

"Tō-jō! Tō-jō! Tō-jō!"

The chant grows louder, a roar of bloodthirsty encouragement urging him to press harder. Every missed and blocked punch only fuels the crowd’s hunger, as if they believe the next one will land and end it all.

In the blue corner, the mood is far from celebratory. Coach Nakahara slams both hands against the canvas, the sharp thud cutting through the noise around him. His face is tight, a storm of worry, frustration, and disbelief.

"Don’t just stand there!" he shouts, voice raw from strain. "Throw the damn hook and pivot out! Move, Ryoma! Move!"

Coach Nakahara can’t see exactly what’s happening, only Tōjō’s back blocking the view, and the troubling fact that Ryoma hasn’t thrown a single punch since being forced into the corner.

But then, through a brief gap in the action, he catches a glimpse of Ryoma’s face, and he freezes.

A faint smirk curls at the edge of Ryoma’s lips, subtle, almost mocking.

"What the..."

Nakahara’s expression drains to pale confusion. He is stunned, unsure if what he saw was real.

Then frustration surges back, and he slams both hands against the canvas, again and again, impatience boiling over.

"What the hell are you doing down there?! Stop playing around and get out!"

But Ryoma doesn’t flinch. None of Nakahara’s shouting gets through, because none of it reaches him. He is already too deep in the zone, too focused, too amused, too high on the rush of adrenaline flooding his veins.

He doesn’t hear the coach, doesn’t hear the crowd. In his world, there’s only Tōjō in front of him, the rhythm of his breathing, and the crisp slicing sound of his punches tearing through the air.

Then, with just eight seconds left in the first round, Tōjō suddenly halts mid-swing. As if frozen in time, he stands there, motionless. The energy in the arena flickers and fades, the noise dims, the crowd quiets.

Three seconds pass, and Tōjō just drops to his knees like a marionette with its strings severed. His eyes are wide open, but vacant, blank, as if the lights are on but no one’s home.

Ryoma remains in the corner, arms tucked near his chin, eyes locked on his opponent. His stance hasn’t changed.

No one saw what happened. No one understands why Tōjō suddenly crumbled, except maybe the referee, who’s already begun to count.

Four!

Five!

Six!

Coach Nakahara looks stunned, speechless.

But in the red corner, Tōjō’s second has erupted into panic, pounding the canvas with both fists.

"Tōjō! Snap out of it! Just stand up and get back here!"

But the referee doesn’t finish the count. When Tōjō remains on his knees, unmoving, the official simply crosses his arms in signal.

The fight is over.

The bell rings, and a wave of confusion sweeps through the arena.

The two commentators stammer through a mix of disbelief and euphoria, their voices overlapping with the roar of the crowd.

Commentator 1: "That might be the most surreal finish I’ve ever seen. No knockout blow, no clear shot, and yet Tōjō just... collapsed."

Commentator 2: "Whether it was timing, precision, or something else entirely, Ryoma just made a statement. That wasn’t luck. That was control."

When Ryoma only takes four steps toward his corner, only then does Tōjō flinch. He blinks once, and snaps back to awareness.

His eyes dart around in bewilderment, realizing he’s still kneeling on the canvas. As if waking from a dream, he jolts upright in shock and turns.

There he sees the blue corner erupting in celebration, Ryoma standing calmly among cheers and claps. The sight disorients him further. His mind races.

"What..."

He spins to face the referee, desperate for an answer. But the official just shakes his head, eyes closed, hands crossing in front of his chest.

Tōjō’s face twists with disbelief. And then anger erupts.

"Are you fucking kidding me?! I’m still fine! I can fight! I was down, yeah! But where’s the count?! Start the damn count at least!"

The referee walks away, saying nothing. Tōjō chases after him, voice rising, but his Second steps in, grabbing his shoulder.

"He did count," the Second says.

"What count? I didn’t hear a damn thing!"

The Second falls silent, looking at his fighter more closely. Then he sighs, finally understanding. Whatever Ryoma did, it must have knocked Tōjō out on his feet, so completely that he hadn’t even registered the fall.

"You were out cold," he says, turning back to his corner.

Tōjō’s eyes widen with a flicker of shaken pride.

"But..."

"Train harder. Come back stronger."

Tōjō just stands frozen, his expression locked in bitter dissatisfaction. His eyes then drift toward Ryoma, who’s already walking away through a crowd of cheering supporters.

His fists clench so tightly that the tension shows through the padding of his gloves. His jaw tightens, his face twisted in a mix of rage and humiliation.

"Tch."

But the fight is over. With a final glance at the ring, he turns and steps through the ropes, forced to make way for the main event. The champion’s match is up next, and that champion just happens to be from his own gym.

He was always hailed as the future champion, following the path paved by his two seniors in two different weight classes. There’s no way he can accept this kind of humiliation.

"I’ll ask for a rematch, and make sure he pays."

Backstage, just beyond the edge of the ring, Ryoma doesn’t expect to see Kaede Hayama, his ex-fiancée. Or at least, that’s who she was in his previous life.

But at this moment, she is still the girlfriend he has dated since high school. Her voice cuts through the crowd noise before her face even comes into view.

"Ryoma!"

She moves like someone chasing a memory she wasn’t sure was real. Her smile is polite, proud, and somehow not as close as it used to be. She has her hair tied up in a loose bun, blazer neat, ID tag bouncing on a lanyard.

"You were amazing!" Kaede holds out a bottled tea. "I can’t believe it ended so fast. You really are serious about this."

In his previous life, Kaede never showed up. He hadn’t even known she was watching. But it makes sense. He lost that fight, so that might make her reluctant to see him.

Ryoma takes the bottle slowly, unsure how he should react to this sudden surprise.

"Thanks," he says, offering an awkward smile like she’s just an ex, not yet ready to accept that, in this timeline, they’re still together. "I remember you said you’d come."

"The office let us leave early," she says. "Some of the guys had tickets. Kind of became a group thing."

Three of her coworkers are behind her. And one of them Ryoma doesn’t need to look at for more than a second.

It’s Kotake Shiba, the coworker who stole Kaede from him in his previous life.

His eyes sharpen at the sight of that guy, and his Vision Grid system flares to life.

Target: Kotake Shiba

Focus: Visual engagement with Subject A1 (Kaede)

Scan Type: Micro-expression and gaze pattern analysis

RESULT:

Gaze lingered longer than baseline average

Noted pattern: brief eye contact → subtle glance toward lips and neckline → return to eyes

Minor facial cue: half-smile, left brow raised (suggests casual interest)

No verbal engagement, but attention consistent over multiple intervals

Interpretation:

→ Possible flirtatious intent detected

→ Social boundary awareness present, but not strongly held

→ No response from Subject A1; interest appears one-sided

System Note:

No action required—monitor only if pattern repeats.

Ryoma’s expression tightens for a split second before he masks it. Kaede is still his girlfriend, for now, and he knows that this guy eventually became her husband in his previous life.

But knowing that he’s already eyeing her while they’re still together?

That sits wrong in every possible way.

📖 Contents

1 Chapter 1: Dead Man’s Ticket 2 Chapter 2: Prologue Rewritten 3 Chapter 3: Slipping Into the Zone 4 Chapter 4: The Silence Before the Count 5 Chapter 5: A Hug Ten Years Late 6 Chapter 6: Soba and A Seed of Doubt 7 Chapter 7: Before the Growth 8 Chapter 8: The Challenger’s Path 9 Chapter 9: The Weight of a Year 10 Chapter 1: Naivety At Its Finest 11 Chapter 1: The Rookie’s Snare 12 Chapter 1: When Pride Bleeds 13 Chapter 1: A Monster In the Making 14 Chapter 1: Take This Home 15 Chapter 1: The Road That Broke Him 16 Chapter 1: And the Slap That Miss 17 Chapter 1: Eyes On the Prize 18 Chapter 1: Verbal Knockdown 19 Chapter 1: When the Big Brother Calls 20 Chapter 2: The Weight of a Year 21 Chapter 2: Kirizume’s Little Audience 22 Chapter 2: The Weight of Reika’s Presence 23 Chapter 2: First Bell, First Blood 24 Chapter 2: No Headgear 25 Chapter 2: The Weight of A Body Blow 26 Chapter 2: Resolve 27 Chapter 2: The Last Exchange 28 Chapter 2: The Mark He Left 29 Chapter 2: The Bruising Truth 30 Chapter 3: Cross-counter From Three Different Angles 31 Chapter 3: An Invitation You Can’t Refuse 32 Chapter 3: The Stone Refuses to be Shaped 33 Chapter 3: How To Negotiate With Noodles 34 Chapter 3: Too Big For Small Stages 35 Chapter 3: The Three Wolves 36 Chapter 3: The Weight of A Promise 37 Chapter 3: Ronin in the Rain 38 Chapter 3: Flaws 39 Chapter 3: Rigged Path 40 Chapter 4: Shrinking the Ring 41 Chapter 4: Forged in Pressure 42 Chapter 4: A Man at Home, A Wolf in the Ring 43 Chapter 4: Silent Misery 44 Chapter 4: Sweat and Shiitake 45 Chapter 4: The Fox at the Scale 46 Chapter 4: The Breaking Point 47 Chapter 4: Rookies’ Stage 48 Chapter 4: Future Against Past 49 Chapter 4: Standing His Ground 50 Chapter 5: Catch Me If You Can 51 Chapter 5: The Trap Within Sight 52 Chapter 5: No Corner to Lean On 53 Chapter 5: The Third Round Gamble 54 Chapter 5: Just Me, and My Boxing 55 Chapter 5: Borrowed Time 56 Chapter 5: Trading Madness 57 Chapter 5: The Weight of A Fist 58 Chapter 5: Clash Outside the Ring 59 Chapter 5: An Offer That Remains 60 Chapter 6: The Craziest Idea 61 Chapter 6: Out of Sync 62 Chapter 6: The Gym That Draws Flies 63 Chapter 6: The Jab That Must Speak 64 Chapter 6: Nakahara’s Joy

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