The Villainess's Reputation [Kingdom Building] - 23. Disciple

23. Disciple

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Chapter 23 of "The Villainess's Reputation [Kingdom Building]" opens revealing: As Marie was about to climb into the carriage, Ravenna's sharp eyes lingered on her.... Keep going!

As Marie was about to climb into the carriage, Ravenna's sharp eyes lingered on her. The sight of the girl, so unassuming yet strikingly familiar, stirred a maelstrom of thoughts in her mind. The air around Ravenna grew heavy with her commanding presence as her lips parted.

“You! Girl with the brown hair! What’s your name?”

Marie froze mid-step, her hand clutching the edge of the carriage for balance. The other former slaves instinctively stepped aside, creating a path between her and Ravenna. The sheer authority in Ravenna’s voice was enough to make them retreat without question.

“Your Highness, these people have already been through too much. Perhaps—” James began, his tone carefully measured as he stepped forward to intercede.

Ravenna silenced him with a raised hand, her eyes never leaving Marie. “I asked you a question.” Her tone was firm, brooking no argument.

Marie hesitated, her head bowing low as she stammered, “M-M... Marie Leon, Your Highness.”

Ravenna's gaze sharpened, her thoughts racing. The name confirmed it. This wasn’t a coincidence. This was her. But instead of revealing her thoughts, she maintained an air of casual curiosity.

“Marie,” she began slowly, “do you want to join the church? Or would you consider another option?”

The question made Marie glance up nervously, her freckled face pale. She had been expecting to fade into obscurity as just another rescued slave. Now, the attention of an imperial princess made her heart race in confusion and fear.

“Joining the church seems like... a stable life,” Marie said softly, her voice trembling. “If I were on my own, I wouldn’t—”

“Your Highness,” one of the guest priests interjected, his tone edged with unease, “this line of questioning is inappropriate. These people have been through hardship and deserve—”

Ravenna’s gaze snapped to him, dark and sharp like a raven’s eyes before swooping for prey. “Silence,” she commanded coldly. “Interrupt me again, and you’ll leave my domain in pieces.”

The priest’s words died in his throat, his face pale.

Ravenna returned her attention to Marie, her voice softer now but no less commanding. “A stable life, is it? What about glory? Purpose? Do you not wish to become something more?”

Marie’s head tilted slightly, her gaze cautiously meeting Ravenna’s. “Is that even possible for someone like... me?” she asked hesitantly.

Ravenna chuckled, the sound low and rich. “Even a lame horse can win races with the right rider. Why not you?”

Marie blinked, unsure if she had just been insulted or encouraged.

James stepped forward cautiously, his brow furrowed. “Your Highness, if I may ask... what exactly are you intending to do?”

Ravenna smiled faintly, a dangerous glint in her eye. “Nothing much, Your Holiness,” she said with mock humility. “I simply feel the time has come for me to take on a disciple.”

The air stilled as the weight of her words sunk in.

The priests, both her own and the guests, exchanged wide-eyed glances. One of the guest priests stammered, “Y-Your Highness, surely you don’t mean this girl? She’s... she was just a slave. Surely there are better—”

“Not even my father, Emperor Andrew Solarius, dictates who I take as a disciple,” Ravenna said sharply. “And yet you presume to challenge me on this?” Her tone was icy, cutting through their protests like a blade.

The priests immediately fell silent, their faces pale and damp with sweat.

Turning back to Marie, Ravenna stepped closer, her imposing presence looming over the girl. “Well? Decide. Do you wish to join the church and live your ‘stable’ life, or will you take a chance and become my disciple?”

Marie’s mind reeled. A disciple of an imperial princess? Such a fate was unimaginable for someone like her. She had dreamed only of survival and perhaps a quiet existence. Now, this.

“Your Highness,” James interjected again, though this time his voice was quieter, cautious. “Why her? You don’t even know anything about her.”

Ravenna’s lips turned into a sly smile. “Must I explain my every whim to you? Fine. I like her hair color. Will that suffice?”

The absurdity of the response stunned James into silence.

Marie looked up slowly, her hands trembling. She wanted to believe this wasn’t some cruel jest. Could this truly be real? Could someone like her achieve something so far beyond her station?

The other former slaves whispered among themselves, their voices hushed and incredulous. Even the guest priests seemed at a loss, their jaws slack.

Ravenna watched the turmoil in Marie’s eyes with quiet satisfaction. “Well, girl? What will it be?”

Marie hesitated, her hands clenching at her sides as thoughts raced through her mind. Joining the church would indeed provide a stable life, she reasoned. She could learn, grow, and perhaps climb the ranks from a junior priestess to a senior priestess, or even—if fortune truly favored her—a high priestess. A life of stability and routine. It was safe. Predictable.

But as she thought deeper, doubts crept in. Was that all she wanted? Safety and predictability?

Her mind flashed to her late father’s words, spoken during simpler times when their village still stood and life was filled with dreams rather than despair. He had always urged her to aim higher, to become someone who left a mark on the world. That dream had seemed distant after the attack on her village, after the brutal hands of Hercules’ criminal syndicate tore her life apart. Now, with her father gone and her freedom newly regained, she had resigned herself to survival, to simply existing.

Yet here was an opportunity so extraordinary it felt surreal. To become an imperial disciple—directly under the wing of someone from the Solarius imperial family—was beyond anything she had dared to imagine. Such a position wasn’t just rare; it was legendary. A door like this might open only once in a lifetime.

Her heart raced as she forced herself to meet Ravenna’s piercing gaze. Marie swallowed hard, her voice trembling but resolute. “I... I want to become your disciple, Your Highness.”

A triumphant smile spread across Ravenna’s face, sharp and full of satisfaction. “Good,” she declared, her voice ringing with authority. “From this day forward, you are no longer a nameless shadow. You are my disciple, Marie Leon.”

The words echoed through the square, silencing every whisper and murmur. The former slaves stared in stunned disbelief, and the priests—both Ravenna’s own and the guests—were frozen in shock.

Ravenna turned sharply on her heel, her cloak sweeping behind her like the wings of a raven in flight. Without looking back, she barked her next command. “James, see to it that the priests are reminded of their place before they leave my city. I won’t tolerate another misstep.”

“Yes, Your Highness,” James replied, bowing deeply, though his face betrayed a flicker of unease.

As Marie stood there, still grappling with the weight of what had just transpired, Ravenna glanced back over her shoulder, her sharp eyes narrowing. “Well? What are you waiting for? Climb into my carriage. Or would you rather change your mind?”

Marie startled, her cheeks flushing. “N-No, Your Highness,” she stammered, quickly bowing. She straightened herself, her steps hesitant but determined as she made her way toward the luxurious carriage.

The gleaming vehicle was unlike anything she had ever seen. Adorned with intricate gold filigree and embossed with the imperial crest, the carriage radiated opulence. Its polished surface reflected the sunlight, almost blinding in its splendor.

Marie’s steps faltered as she approached the velvet-lined interior. She felt out of place, her worn clothes and meek demeanor stark contrasts to the grandeur before her.

Ravenna watched her with an impatient expression, one eyebrow arching slightly. “Stop dawdling. Get in.”

“Yes, Your Highness,” Marie said quickly, her voice barely above a whisper. She climbed into the carriage awkwardly, her hands brushing against the fine upholstery.

As the door closed behind her, Ravenna took her seat opposite Marie, her posture regal and commanding. She regarded her new disciple with a piercing gaze, the faintest hint of amusement curling at the edges of her lips.

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📖 Contents

1 1. Royal Decree 2 2. Reputation System 3 3. Planning for Future 4 4. Arrival in Jola Island 5 5. Jola’s City’s First Change 6 6. Jola City’s State 7 7. Stabilizing 8 8. Jola’s Progress 9 9. Broadleaf Arrowhead 10 10. Saintess 11 11. Water of Jola 12 12. New Regulations 13 13. Herptian Church 14 14. Ravenna’s Hidden Agenda 15 15. Eugene’s Failure 16 16. Resources On Jola Island 17 17. Reason for Fish’s Disappearance 18 18. Dungeon 19 19. Economics of Centralization 20 20. Eight Floor Dungeon 21 21. Trip to Northern Coastline 22 22. An Uninvited Ship 23 23. Disciple 24 24. Crime Rate 25 25. Disciple’s schedule 26 26. Limestone and Cement 27 27. Black Sand and Iron 28 28. Jola’s Dungeon 29 29. Golden Silkworm 30 30. Council of Vassal States 31 31. Saltpeter and Ice 32 32. Workings of a Spring 33 33. Kevin Morgen’s Loyalty 34 34. Ascend to Celestia Castle 35 35. The Coastal Town of Ronin 36 36. Attack Plan on Jola Island 37 37. Apostle of Herptian 38 38. Return From Northern Coastline 39 39. Defense Plan for Jola 40 40. Exploiting the Reputation Log 41 41. Steam and Motion 42 42. Defensive Measures Part 1 43 43. Defensive Measures Part 2 44 44. Spring Powered Ballistas 45 45. Faring Elie 46 46. Boundless Wisdom 47 47. Conspired War Part 1: Strategic Arrival 48 48. Conspired War Part 2: In the Starry Night 49 49. Conspired War Part 3: On The Eastern Dunes 50 50. Conspired War Part 4: Ruthless Princess 51 51. Conspired War Part 5: Emotional Manipulation 52 52. Conspired War Part 6: On The Western Cliffs 53 53. Conspired War Part 7: Just Surrender 54 54. A New Morning After The War 55 55. War Prisoners 56 56. Arrival In Ronin Mansion 57 57. Negotiations 58 58. A Thousand and Three Hundred Mana Coins 59 59. Addressing the Slaves 60 60. An Abomination 61 61. Changes to Jola 62 62. Weather of Jola 63 63. Emperor of the Empire 64 64. Original Ravenna’s Fate? 65 65. New Renovations for the Education of the Youth of Jola City 66 66. Ceremony 67 67. Staying Behind 68 68. Invitation to the Capital 69 69. Aim and Practice 70 70. Saintess’s Power 71 71. Tap Water 72 72. Siblings in the Imperial Palace of Ancorna 73 73. A Breakfast at Imperial Palace 74 74.The Capital City 75 75. Herptian 76 76. Conversation With A Goddess 77 77. Rules for Survival 78 78. The Imperial Family of Ancorna 79 79. Marie’s First Imperial Breakfast 80 80. Emperor Andrew’s Intention 81 81.Plan to return to the Succession Race 82 82. Important Guest 83 83. Ravenna’s Imperial Faction 84 84. Magical Beast Attack Plan 85 85. Duke Morgen’s Assistance 86 86. Stirring Up The Pot 87 87. Meeting Of The Two Apostles 88 88. Just in Time 89 89. A Deal with the Protagonist 90 90. A Deal with the Protagonist Part 2 91 91. Re-forming the Faction 92 92. Tax Haven 93 93.Jola’s Casino 94 94. Serena’s Return 95 95. The Duel Part 1 96 96. The Duel Part 2 97 97. The Imperial Wedding Part 1 98 98. The Imperial Wedding Part 2 99 99. Magical Beasts Attack Part 1 100 100. Magical Beasts Attack Part 2 101 101.Beginning Of A Counter Attack 102 102. Counter Attack Preparations Done in Advance Part 1 103 103. Counter Attack Preparations Done in Advance Part 2 104 104. The Counter Attack 105 105. Amplified Magic 106 106. Aftermath 107 107. Ravenna’s Reward 108 108. Return to Succession 109 109. Beast Slayer 110 110. Three Rewards 111 111. Fifth in Line 112 112. Second Odyssey 113 113.Order of Expansion 114 114. In Between Space and Time 115 115. Return To Jola 116 116. A Real Family 117 117. Neutral Stance 118 118. Nolan’s Proposal 119 119. Newlyweds In Jola 120 120. Jola’s Innovation And Business Initiative 121 121. Flourishing Businesses 122 122. Southern Islands 123 123. Republic of Otto 124 124. Strait of Otto-Bolita 125 125. Criminals 126 126. Hope For The Unredeemable 127 127. The Best Kind Of Punishment 128 128. Public Execution 129 129. Kim Dukedom 130 130. Need For Defenses 131 131. Flamethrower 132 132. Solution for Order of Expansion 133 133. Kenric Jade 134 134. Free Cities And Annexation 135 135. Water Meter and Train 136 136. A Deposit 137 137. Aurora Flask 138 138. Herptian’s Desired Beauties 139 139. Old Friend’s Plead 140 140. Ravenna And Aurora’s Friendship 141 141. Lust of Herptian Apostles 142 142. The Cult of Absolution 143 143. Trains and Tracks 144 144. Fulfilling Order of Expansion 145 145. Azure Vales 146 146. Seraphina of Azure Vales 147 147. Simple Day in Kim City 148 148. Defense Plan For Kim City Part 1 149 149. Defense Plan For Kim City Part 2 150 150. Defense Plan For Kim City Part 3 151 151. Unmanned Ships 152 152. Two Faced Player Part 1 153 153. Two Faced Player Part 2 154 154. Hot Air Balloons 155 155. Mandatory Social Service 156 156. Randomizer 157 157. War For Jola’s Honor Part 1 158 159. War For Jola’s Honor Part 2 159 159. War For Jola’s Honor Part 3 160 160. War For Jola’s Honor Part 4 161 161. War For Jola’s Honor Part 5 162 162. War For Jola’s Honor Part 6 163 163. War For Jola’s Honor Part 7 164 164. Kim City’s First War Part 1: Ships on The Horizon 165 165. Kim City’s First War Part 2: Quicklime Release 166 166. Kim City’s First War Part 3: Beginning of the Battle at Three Front 167 167. Kim City’s First War Part 4: Hidden Schemes Part 1 168 168. Kim City’s First War Part 4: Hidden Schemes Part 2 169 169. Kim City’s First War Part 5: Eastern And The Western Beach 170 170. Kim City’s First War Part 6: Battle At The Port Front 171 171. Kim City’s First War Part 6: End of Battle at Three Front Part 1 172 172. The Deal Between Gods Part 1 173 173. Kim City’s First War Part 6: End of Battle at Three Front Part 2 174 174. The Deal Between Gods Part 2 175 175. Kim City’s First War Part 6: End of Battle at Three Front Part 3 176 176. Kim City’s First War Part 7: Balloons in the Sky 177 177. The Final Push 178 178. Warfare Weapons 179 179. Rapid Fire 180 180. Infiltration 181 181. Unexpected Attack 182 182. Heavy Heart 183 183. Who Are You? 184 184. Days from The Past 185 185. System Update 186 186. New Features 187 187. Origin Domain 188 188. Discovery of Saintess 189 189. Changing Tides 190 190. Different Perspective 191 191. Plans for the Future 192 192. High Priest Caldus 193 193. New Spells 194 194. The First Railway Station 195 195. Cultivating A Strategy Against Terrifying Odds 196 196. Testing Out Lie Detection Skill 197 197. Use Case for Lie Detection 198 198. Ravenna’s Faction 199 199. Preparation for Festival of Lust 200 200. Complicated Position 201 201. Aurora’s Subordinates Loyalty 202 202. Reports 203 203. Playing Into The Game 204 204. Ravenna's Letter 205 205. The Apprentice 206 206. The Glasswork 207 207. Restaurant At The City Plaza 208 208. Celestia’s Story 209 209. In The Origin Domain 210 210. Letters From Mainland 211 211. Priest Caldus’s Death 212 212. First Day Of The Festival 213 213. Ondol Heating System 214 214. Second Day of The Festival 215 215. Aria's Arrival: Third Day of The Festival 216 216. Eugene’s Realization: Fourth Day of The Festival 217 217. Petty Squabbles: Fifth Day of The Festival 218 218. The Day of Dahlia Solarius Death Part 1 219 219. The Day of Dahlia Solarius’s Death Part 2 220 220. Eugene’s Proposition 221 221. Sixth Day of the Festival 222 222. The Day Of The Festival Part 1 223 223. The Day Of The Festival Part 2 224 224. To The Free Cities 225 225. Powerful Front 226 226. Sailing to Otto City 227 227. The Day of Dahlia Solarius’s Death Part 3 228 228. Meeting Kenric Again 229 229. Council of Otto 230 230. Annexation 231 231. Kim City’s Protection 232 232. Gracie’s Finding 233 233. The Treaty of Red Encirclement 234 234. Need for more Reputation Points 235 235. A Captured Moment Part 1 236 236. A Captured Moment Part 2 237 237. Steam Ships 238 238. Need For More Points 239 239. Figuring Out Marie’s Abilities 240 240. Guns And Cannons 241 241. Rexford and Laila 242 242. Helping Aurora 243 243. Offensive Plan 244 244. Prince Landon’s Rebellion 245 245. Gun Testing 246 246. Chaos in Ancorna Empire 247 247. The Iron Beast and Accelerated Production 248 248. Immigration to Kim City 249 249. The God of Secrets 250 250. The Hidden Domain 251 251. Umbra’s Suspicious Hunch 252 252. Entry into Mainland 253 253. A Conversation with a God 254 254. A Year’s End 255 255. Konfir’s Last Stand 256 256. Clear Forward 257 257. Unpredictable Timeline 258 258. Arrival from Western Continent 259 259. Clashing on all sides 260 260. Lord Dain 261 261. Witch of the West 262 262. Dungeons Spawning Everywhere Part 1 263 263. Dungeons Spawning Everywhere Part 2 264 264. Inside A Dungeon 265 265. Survival in the Dungeon 266 266. Northern City Panic 267 267. Dungeon Scan 268 268. Spider Nest 269 269. Endless 270 270. Revision On Theory 271 271. Door Part 1 272 272. Door Part 2 273 273. Meeting the Witch of the West 274 274. Anna Jade 275 275. Against the Antagonist 276 276. Glass Ball 277 277. Universal Origin 278 278. Invitation to the Origin Domain 279 279. Joy’s Death 280 280. Absolute Being’s Offer 281 281. Resolution 282 282. Revolution 283 283. Parade of Faith 284 284. The Duchess Awakened 285 285. Causality 286 286. Humanity’s Alliance 287 287. Otto Immigrant’s Arrival In Kim Part 1 288 288. Compromises 289 289. Otto Immigrant’s Arrival In Kim Part 2 290 290. Humanity Defense Treaty 291 291. Universal Conclusion 292 292. Current Condition of the Situation 293 293. Going Back Home 294 294. Detection of Mind Control 295 295. The Three Magic Systems 296 296. Laila’s Story From The Past Part 1 297 297. Laila’s Story From The Past Part 2 298 298. Current State of Projects 299 299. Herptian HQ’s Reconciliation 300 300. Like The Days Of The Past 301 301. Return To Their Stations 302 302. Familial Affection 303 303. Andrew Solarius’s Decision 304 304. Eugene’s New Path 305 305. What Led To The Vacant Throne Part 1 306 306. What Led To The Vacant Throne Part 2 307 307. What Led To The Vacant Throne Part 3 308 308. What Led To The Vacant Throne Part 4 309 309. Distance Between Affection 310 310. Funeral for the Kim Troops 311 311. One of The Twelve Blessings 312 312. Andrew Solarius’s Decree 313 313. What’s the Hidden Motive? 314 314. The Imperial Funeral 315 315. Ravenna’s Combat Master Part 1 316 316. Ravenna’s Combat Master Part 2 317 317. Faldeus Arm-Lohai’s Reality 318 318. Western Continent Reaction 319 319. Makings Of New Succession Law 320 320. Research and Development in Kim Dukedom 321 321. Tensions Raising 322 322. Rexford’s Story From The Past Part 1 323 323. Rexford’s Story From The Past Part 2 324 324. Dangers Around You 325 325. Quest Based Succession 326 326. Conley Assassin 327 327. Magic Research 328 328. Back To Kim City 329 329. New Flowers 330 330. Magic Tools Distribution 331 331. A Chaotic Day in Kim Castle 332 332. Master And Disciple’s Duel 333 333. Making An Odyssey Ring 334 334. Era of Spark 335 335. Electricity 336 336. Nillie Vermen The Blacksmith 337 337. Nature of the Domain 338 338. Herptian’s Deception 339 339. Shape Of The Soul 340 340. Landon in Nicola Uprising 341 341. Hidden Ruins 342 342. Katrina’s Worries/Dearshore

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