Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven - BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor

BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor

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Chapter 51 of "Biracial Edgelord Can't Make Immortal : Power of Ten, Book Seven" opens revealing: I swapped out our light exercise clothing for my Robes and Cirru’s armor, cleaning up... Keep going!

I swapped out our light exercise clothing for my Robes and Cirru’s armor, cleaning up the sweat at the same time as I recalled to my hand.

Cirru’s real talent in combat was in open-hand fighting, what they called a Mystic Tradition on this world. Attempting to replicate her natural weaponry and fighting techniques with humanoid limbs was startlingly effective and instinctive to her, and she gobbled up unarmed combat techniques with speed and zeal. With enough years, she’d actually eclipsed me in some aspects of unarmed combat, since I tended to focus on Sun and Moon, and she enthusiastically borrowed from anywhere and anything she could.

The south wall of the taproom was open and exposed to the, and would likely pique the interest of whatever had intruded. We just stepped to the corner and waited.

Cirru was a LOT tougher than anyone would have any right to expect normally… but this person had seen right through the Illusions concealing the Inn, which likely meant some form of True Sight, and would thus likely see Cirru and know what she was.

I had a up still, and even if it had been fifteen years inside here, I still wasn’t a physical adult by any stretch. I’d need probably thirty years to actually ‘grow into’ my true appearance, so I had a on specifically to defeat and other such revealing spells for just that purpose.

Someone stepped out from inside the taproom, looking around with great confidence. Sharp blue eyes settled on the two of us.

He looked mostly human, with frazzled hair gone gray, lines on his face, and an expression that hinted at intelligence and a roguish set of mind. His clothing style was in none of the styles of any of the current cultures that I knew of… and looked remarkably like a natty cheap British suit from the twentieth century of Earth.

“Well, what do we have here?” he exclaimed in a tone friendly and absolutely sure of himself. “An elf and a dragon, trapped inside a time loop? Not something you see every day, is it?” he remarked.

Cirru looked at me, already uneasy as I studied the fellow.

Anti-magic around him, and some Divination Wards. Not much there to read at all.

“Every single day, as a matter of fact,” I replied shortly to his remark, earning an instant toothy smile from him.

“Oh, that must be so true, so true!” he agreed with an easy nod of his head, strolling towards us with his hands in his jacket pockets, clearly not afraid of us in the slightest. “I am The Doctor. Might I inquire as to your names?” he asked pleasantly.

That was NOT a British accent. A good attempt at one, maybe. Truth made me very aware of verbal untruths, and that most definitely was NOT his Name or title.

“I am the Lady Edge. This is Cirruluxul,” I replied without batting an eye, my attention more on his hands than his face, looking at the magic around him. “What do you want here, Doctor?” I asked calmly.

He studied me and my completely unimpressed expression with clear interest. “Well, I’ve something of an interest in Time, and this place has been on my list of places to clean up for some time, Lady Edge. I thought I’d pop in and see what was going on here, and perhaps take care of the problem.”

I tilted my head slightly, considering his words. Some sort of temporal adjudicator? “I have already killed Benjamin Horst.” His expression immediately hardened. “The temporal vortex is in flux and not manifesting, and likely can’t for another decade or two. I am in the process of closing the temporal loop, but I’ve another thousand years into the past to go at the very least, and can’t do so until the Portal manifests again. As the Inn exists over a thousand years more into the past, and over twenty-five hundred years into the future, you cannot wipe it out without causing a temporal paradox and broken timeline, which is likely considerably worse than anything the Inn is generating in its current condition.

“There’s nothing for you to do here, Doctor. If I fail, you’ll have to wait three thousand years to greet the far side of the loop and ride it back to close it. You’re far too early… so if you are planning to do anything to the Loop, it must be to break it and cause chaos.”

His bright blue eyes remained focused on me, and his smile grew wider. “Oh, a clever one, and a time traveler, no doubt, constrained to live within these very walls unless time should wipe you away?” He laughed slightly, clear cunning malice starting to percolate around him. “I hadn’t expected a mortal to be so well-versed in temporal mechanics, Lady Edge.”

“I hadn’t expected an Entropic Immortal of your lack of power to get himself involved in temporal matters.” His toothy smile slowly went away as he stared at me unblinkingly, his care-free countenance slipping. “You aren’t going to be allowed to threaten the timeline, and the Inn clearly stands for another three thousand years. You either don’t have the power to destroy it, or there’s Immortals backing it which are beyond your power to affect… or your courage to provoke!

“Your potential recruit is long annihilated. You can do nothing else, and messing with mortals on the Prime is against Immortal law, as I understand it. You are wasting your time here, even if time means nothing to you.” I looked him up and down, visually dismissive of him. “You’re also a fifth-dimensional being. A Time Portal that has trouble conveying us mortals around is going to be absolutely unusable by you.”

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“Well, well, well. A little mortal who thinks she knows some things.” There were shadows growing on and about him, starting with his eyes, which began to blacken. All friendliness was gone, and had turned into mounting malevolence. “You are absolutely right, of course. Immortal law forbids direct intervention on the mortal plane. However, that is only if we are caught!”

Contrary to the threat in his voice, the way his Aura was starting to rise, and how Cirruluxul’s knees were shaking in mounting horror, I looked up and around in interest. “Oh, that is very, very good to know,” I said into the darkness that was gathering around him. “Do you mind if I use that?”

He was a bit deep into his acting persona, and couldn’t help himself. “Mind if you use what?” he asked, rather nastily, his fingernails starting to slowly blacken, as did his teeth.

“The fact Immortals can’t see what is going on inside here.”

He blinked.

lit up on , and the black pits of his eyes grew very wide, his anti-magic swarming out…

went off on , and Roses and Skulls erupted and went for him.

Supposedly Immortals were immune to all mortal magic, but immediately bypassed that. His Anti-Magic Aura had an excellent chance of stopping my magic, too, except sheathed my in power and cut through his Anti-Magic like it was butter, completely ignoring it and punching into his mortal form.

With vivus, Banefire, and a LOT of Holy Force damage, along with the I’d ladled into while standing there.

He exploded in mid-scream.

Holy Force energies ravaged his body and soul with powers he’d never had to face in all his existence, pure anathema to everything that he was and represented. His mortal facade was torn apart, and the spirit within was blown completely apart as Immortal energies were sliced through and completely disrupted by the and .

The whole world went white, and swallowed us up.

I blinked, and opened my eyes.

I was laying in a pit, washed white, square-shaped, exactly as deep as the basement of the Thisbean Inn. There was no Inn around us, completely wiped away and destroyed by the release of energy when I’d dusted that avatar of whoever, whatever. The walls were just hollowed-out stone in the ground, and nothing remained of the Inn itself… except the impassable wall of Time that had contained everything.

That hadn’t been a simple destruction of an avatar, either. That thing had lost whatever amount of energy had been parceled out to its form, suffering complete annihilation and release. He wouldn’t even know what had happened, only that he’d suffered a crippling loss and not how or why it had occurred.

However, a permanent loss meant he’d run into something far more powerful than he was, something capable of stripping that power from him, which meant he definitely did NOT want to come back here and stir that force up again, whatever it was.

At least, that was my reasoning as I laid there, staring up at the sky.

I looked over at a wheezing, and saw Cirruluxul in her dragon form, still out cold.

She was several feet longer now than she’d been when I first met her, clearly aging towards her deep dragonsleep, ready to shed her scales and grow to the next size. She was also a lot more muscular than she’d been back then, basically having worked and invested herself into acquiring the equivalent of an Advanced Template, with +4 to all base Stats.

Truly an exceptional dragon, if completely crushed by the power of an Immortal.

I guessed that the lich was finally registered as missing, and his Patron had come looking for him. He still wasn’t going to know what had happened, but now he wouldn’t want to investigate, and would be thinking something out there was aware of him and his schemes, and had punished him severely for them.

Healthy paranoia would be crippling him badly. Still, I had marked his Aura.

The sky was moody and cloudy, but that was fine. I could feel the moon going down, the sky was lightening to grays and reds in the east, and dawn was coming.

Time rolled, and magic set to work.

Scattered dust dispersed through time wound back and began to gather. Carved blocks grew back into place on the stone all around us, and also under us, reforming something that had been completely annihilated.

In less than a minute, the stones of the Thisbean Inn’s foundation were all in place, and the wood began to materialize and gather. Planks and arches, studs and boards materialized out of nowhere and fell into place in a kind of reverse explosion. Nails and screws zipped into place, splinters and flinders flashed back to restore broken boards, and the walls went up, then the roof, and the floors above us slammed down into place as the view of the sky above was cut away.

I sat up slowly, and Cirru.

She was at precisely 1 Health, hammered to within an inch of death, but not going over.

Because of me, of course.

I tapped her, and let the go off.

Her eyes popped open as Sacred Healing energies poured through her, revitalizing and restoring the massive trauma and shock to her system. She went from hovering on the edge of death to back to full strength and vitality in but seconds, surging to her feet and looking around wildly for signs of the intruder.

What she saw was the basement reforming around us, braces and struts moving into place. Now the racks of barrels and the doors and stairs were being rebuilt, wine bottles reforming, and spirits surging out of nowhere into reconstituting barrels and casks as everything was returned and restored to what it had been.

We’d seen the restoration before, but nothing quite as dramatic as this.

Cirru said nothing for the long minute it took for everything to snap back to place and form, and then a cycling as the dawn flitted across everything above us, visible through a side window.

The Thisbean Inn had returned from being literally atomized.

More stones swirled around us, and from nothing, the statues that were my Company, long-since acknowledged by the Inn as ‘parts of it’ by carefully tugging the magic to cover them, rebuilt themselves quickly and precisely into the dreaming forms of those waiting to get out of here, surrounding us once more in their careful rows of ready petrified bodies.

📖 Contents

1 BECMI (Biracial Edgelord Can Make Immortal!) : Prologue 2 BECMI Chapter 1 – Babyhood Sucks 3 BECMI Chapter 2 – We’re at Character Creation and trying to Minmax! 4 BECMI Chapter 3 – Getting Around 5 BECMI Chapter 4 – Setting Yourself Up for Success 6 BECMI Chapter 5 – Immortal Lies, Mortal Meanings 7 BECMI Chapter 6 – Going Hunting above my Weight 8 BECMI Chapter 7 – Material Acquisitions 9 BECMI Chapter 8 – Out in the Darkness 10 BECMI Chapter 9 – Picking up an Animal Friend 11 BECMI Chapter 10 – Butter and Poison 12 BECMI Chapter 11 – Item Creation Guidelines are Important 13 BECMI Chapter 12 – A Stave to Edgelord By 14 BECMI Chapter 13 – With This Staff in Hand... 15 BECMI Chapter 14 – The not-Radiance, it's Gammathauma Radiation, Fools! 16 BECMI Chapter 15 – Explosive News 17 BECMI Chapter 16 – A Study in Time 18 BECMI Chapter 17 – The Elements of Time 19 BECMI Chapter 18 – Busy as the Bugs 20 BECMI Chapter 19 – What Lies Over There 21 BECMI Chapter 20 – Miraculous Possibilities 22 BECMI Chapter 21 – The First Dragon 23 BECMI Chapter 22 – Leveraging Time 24 BECMI Chapter 23 – Working the Runes 25 BECMI Chapter 24 – Runes and Running About 26 BECMI Chapter 25 – Dwarven Hospitality 27 BECMI Chapter 26 – Elven Hospitality 28 BECMI Chapter 27 – Truth Cuts Deep 29 BECMI Chapter 28- A Wrinkle in Time 30 BECMI Chapter 29 – Time is Cruel 31 BECMI Chapter 30 – New Recruits 32 BECMI Chapter 31 – Out-Voted 33 BECMI Chapter 32 – A Long Trek Backwards 34 BECMI Chapter 33 – Warrior and Human 35 BECMI Chapter 34 – The Alternate Road 36 BECMI Chapter 35 – Past Misgivings 37 BECMI Chapter 36 – Another Pause in Proceedings 38 BECMI Chapter 37 – Stragglers Here and There 39 BECMI Chapter 38 – More Stragglers 40 BECMI Chapter 39 - Outlawed 41 BECMI Chapter 40 – Messing with History 42 BECMI Chapter 41 – A Potent Future from the Past 43 BECMI Chapter 42 – One Last Night before we Rest 44 BECMI Chapter 43 – Filling Up the Time 45 BECMI Chapter 44 – A Chill is Setting In 46 BECMI Chapter 45 – A Cataclysm Cometh 47 BECMI Chapter 46 – Some Time Alone 48 BECMI Chapter 47 – A Dragon’s Years 49 BECMI Chapter 48 – Draconic Discoveries 50 BECMI Chapter 49 – The Long Years 51 BECMI Chapter 50 – An Immortal Visitor 52 BECMI Chapter 51 – Immortal Consequences 53 BECMI Chapter 52 - Dragonsleep 54 BECMI Chapter 53 – It’s Time to Go 55 BECMI Chapter 54 – A Final Pause 56 BECMI Chapter 55 – The Last Sunken Hurdles 57 BECMI Chapter 56 – A Scale of Time 58 BECMI Chapter 57 – All the way here to Thisbean Inn 59 BECMI Chapter 58 – Of Ladies and Kings 60 BECMI Chapter 59 – The Guilty Parties 61 BECMI Chapter 60 – Divining the Traitors 62 BECMI Chapter 61 – Of Kings and Things 63 BECMI Chapter 62 – The Ei is Watching 64 BECMI Chapter 63 – A Roadmap to the Future 65 BECMI Chapter 64 – Marked for Greatness 66 BECMI Chapter 65 – About Time and the Land of Darkmoor 67 BECMI Chapter 66 – Trade Matters 68 BECMI Chapter 67 – First Contracts 69 BECMI Chapter 68 – A Working Vacation? 70 BECMI Chapter 69 – Preserved by Amber 71 BECMI Chapter 70 – Getting into Positions 72 BECMI Chapter 71 - Attendance 73 BECMI Chapter 72 – Extending Influence 74 BECMI Chapter 73 – Family Problems Counselor 75 BECMI Chapter 74 – Timely Political Contributions 76 BECMI Chapter 75 – Running Simulations 77 BECMI Chapter 76 – Prepping for Adventure 78 BECMI Chapter 77 – Module, er, Quest Accepted! 79 BECMI Chapter 78 – The Batrachian Basilica 80 BECMI Chapter 79 – Scouting Speed Run Complete 81 BECMI Chapter 80 – Special Forces in Special Places 82 BECMI Chapter 81 – A Failure of Technology 83 BECMI Chapter 82 – Taking the Temple 84 BECMI Chapter 83 – Setting the Spoils 85 BECMI Chapter 84 – New Roads Forward 86 BECMI Chapter 85 – Recruitment Drive 87 BECMI Chapter 86 – Crazy Origins 88 BECMI Chapter 87 – Off to the Weirwoods 89 BECMI Chapter 88 – A Walk in the Moonlight 90 BECMI Chapter 89 – Annihilation: Code Black 91 BECMI Chapter 90 – To the Stormspires and Overstern 92 BECMI Chapter 91 – The Man in the Middle 93 BECMI Chapter 92 – The Forgebridge 94 BECMI Chapter 93 – The Abbey 95 BECMI Chapter 94 – Murder, She Witnessed 96 BECMI Chapter 95 – The Hunt will begin Soon 97 BECMI Chapter 96 – Recovering a Regent 98 BECMI Chapter 97 – A Blood Price 99 BECMI Chapter 98 – Ill Deeds come home to Roost 100 BECMI Chapter 99 – Freedom Rides on Black Wings 101 BECMI Chapter 100 – Beckoned by Fire 102 BECMI Chapter 101 – Forged in a Lava Pit… Sounds Familiar?… 103 BECMI Chapter 102 – I Wish for a Bad Ending to All This 104 BECMI Chapter 103 – A Massacre for a Massacre 105 BECMI Chapter 104 – The Judgment of Heaven 106 BECMI Chapter 105 – Energy in Hand with Entropy 107 BECMI Chapter 106 – Another Courting Call 108 BECMI Chapter 107 – Ripple Effects 109 BECMI Chapter 108 – Fiends for Demons 110 BECMI Chapter 109 – Immortal Words and Wills 111 BECMI Chapter 110 – The Collapse of the Khirifi 112 BECMI Chapter 111 – Intervention of the Elders 113 BECMI Chapter 112 – The Roads to Immortality 114 BECMI Chapter 113 – A Road to the Eternal 115 BECMI Chapter 114 – The End of the Khirifi Empire 116 BECMI Chapter 115 – More Imperial Ambitions 117 BECMI Chapter 116 – Conjured Doom 118 BECMI Chapter 117 – Deathly Bequests 119 BECMI Chapter 118 – On a Higher Cause 120 BECMI Chapter 119 – An Expansion of Strength 121 BECMI Chapter 120 – Immediate Plans 122 BECMI Chapter 121 – At the Tower of Daffid the Red 123 BECMI Chapter 122 – Fiery Food leads to Fond Farewells 124 BECMI Chapter 123 – Fallen from the Stars 125 BECMI Chapter 124 – Diplomatic Dealings 126 BECMI Chapter 125 – Inside the Barhund 127 BECMI Chapter 126 – Hearts at Ease 128 BECMI Chapter 127 – Discussions of Consequences 129 BECMI Chapter 128 – Waking from a Bad Dream 130 BECMI Chapter 129 – The Destiny of the Barhund 131 BECMI Chapter 130 – A Call to Battle 132 BECMI Chapter 131 – A Letter of Blood and Souls 133 BECMI Chapter 132 – Where We are Going and What We are Doing 134 BECMI Chapter 133 – A Map to Massacre By 135 BECMI Chapter 134 – The Cost of a Curse 136 BECMI Chapter 135 – There is no Glory in This 137 BECMI Chapter 136 – Breaking the Northern Fist 138 BECMI Chapter 137 – Vikings get Viked by Southern Cross 139 BECMI Chapter 138 – Killer Legacies 140 BECMI Chapter 139 – What is Locked Within 141 BECMI Chapter 140 – Yellow goes White 142 BECMI Chapter 141 – Something for Later 143 BECMI Chapter 142 – Annealed by the Annelid 144 BECMI Chapter 143 – Cavernous Elimination 145 BECMI Chapter 144 – Cold Relief 146 BECMI Chapter 145 – A Moment to Reflect 147 BECMI Chapter 146 – The Temples are Doomed 148 BECMI Chapter 147 – Death is, in fact, Quite Proud 149 BECMI Chapter 148 – Not a Duel of Fates 150 BECMI Chapter 149 – Chatter in the Coliseum 151 BECMI Chapter 150 – It’s Not Fighting and Slaughter, It’s just Showbiz! 152 BECMI Chapter 151 – Avaunt, ye Avatar of Nifl! 153 BECMI Chapter 152 – Gold and Glory 154 BECMI Chapter 153 – And there was Dancing 155 BECMI Chapter 154 – A Dwarf Redoubts 156 BECMI Chapter 155 – A Legacy to Endure 157 BECMI Chapter 156 – Unmoored Parts moving in the Dark 158 BECMI Chapter 157 – Grifting by a Graf 159 BECMI Chapter 158 – A Return to the Present 160 BECMI Chapter 159 – Wind and Fire do not mix Well 161 BECMI Chapter 160 – I Wish I Knew... 162 BECMI Chapter 161 – Clans and Claymores 163 BECMI Chapter 162 – Time is Anchored 164 BECMI Chapter 163 – Overland Travels 165 BECMI Chapter 164 – Over Roads, Past the Dales, as We Head for the Bleaklands Trails… 166 BECMI Chapter 165 – A New Trade Road 167 BECMI Chapter 166 – A New Trade City 168 BECMI Chapter 167 – Elves Moving Forward with the Times 169 BECMI Chapter 168 – On the Road Again, I just can’t Wait to get on the Road Again… 170 BECMI Chapter 169 – A Bridge over Troubled Waters 171 BECMI Chapter 170 – The Bridge is no Trouble 172 BECMI Chapter 171 – The Road ahead is Bleak, Bleak, I Say! 173 BECMI Chapter 172 – Just Some Random Mercantile Proceedings

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